It Started with a Promise

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Description

Short sypnosis :

a story of a little girl who made a promise with her childhood friend.
After 12 years she returned to her hometown, since she don't have any
relatives in Korea, Minho (her best boy-friend) insisted that she should
stay with him. To her surprise the guy whom she hated the most from the first
time they met was one of Minho's mates and they're going to live in just one
house. Will they stay quarrelling over things ? Will she find her childhood
friend? Would she still remember the promise they made?

mika : Then let's make a promise :)
boy : What kind of promise?
mika : That we will marry each other, I promise that I will return and find you
boy : Then I'll wait for your return
mika : Let's make a pinky swear :)
boy : It's a promise :)

Foreword

Disclaimer : I Do not own any of the characters here, this is just a FanFic.
Everything written here are just out of my imaginative mind :)

Thank you to CANDY POPS POSTER SHOP for the awesome poster!

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Issdnn #1 Jul 12, 2015 08:57:59

Chapter 92: Okay, I'm reading this on 2015 and you probably won't reply my comment but oh well, at least I've tried to tell my thoughts to you.
I read ALL of the chapters without exception. Actually I agree with the review that said the flow is really fast. I think there's not too many confilcts, or which I should say that you're stuck with one conflict and you bring it for so many chapters and it does not really interesting because some of the readers probably have guessed what would happen next (like Jessica's conflict). And I actually hope you could extend the part where Yui and Jonghyun getting along with each other (as a side story because I really think it's interesting) rather than bringing Jessica's case for too long (Key and Mika have 2 fights because Jessica, am I right?)
HOWEVER, I think this story is not as bad as the reviewer's think. I enjoy and understand quite much, but I do agree that sometimes it seems unrealistic. Well, for the typo I COMPLETELY understand. I know some people can't write on Microsoft Office Word for some reasons (actually I've been writing through Memopad, Email, etc.)
And for grammar and vocabulary, I think it's not that bad too. For people who doesn't speak English (me too), I think THE VERY FIRST POINT is people UNDERSTAND what you're trying to say. No matter it's a mix past and present tense (okay I know IT IS ACTUALLY NOT GOOD), the most important thing (esp for amateur) is people get what you mean. BECAUSE IT WILL BE USELESS TO FOCUS JUST ON THE PAST/PRESENT TENSE. (Pls do not misunderstood of what I mean)
And lastly, I just want to tell you that there are some people think that they made stories to please others, to satisfy others. However, there are some people too that think they made stories to satisfy themselves, for their needs. And I'm the second. I choose to write to satisfy my needs. I care for other's opinions, I considerate their words within my stories. I'm trying to be open BUT it should not affect my ideas.
Good job♡

-2Mirae- ^{14 streak} #2 Aug 4, 2013 18:05:41

Chapter 92: even though the person who reviewed this story said she couldnt continue finishing i thought the story was awesome ^^ even though you have a bit of grammar mistake you could correct yourself next time ^^
i really enjoyed reading this ^^

locketblingermvp #3 Jul 4, 2013 10:58:38

Chapter 92: Wow... it's my third time reading... and wow.... i love it... SOOOO MUCH! Thank youuuuuuuu!! U r awesummmmmmm